homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Wow. That the best three words to describe yourself.
You see, you have your own character and capabilities that other people do not have.
So nurture such capabilities and these will help you to achieve what you covet the most.
Congratulations in your composition for doing a good work. Nice one. Keep it up! ^^
I\'ll see you again tomorrow.
~~ Always,
Kathrine
If I had to describe myself using only three words, I would use \"passionate, active, patient\" and describe me.
>> If I had to describe myself using only three words, I would the words \"passionate, active, and patient\" that will best describe me.
Because these words are the best to express me.
>> CORRECT
>> or, Because these words best describe me.
First, I\'m a passionate person, so I always do my best when I do something.
>> CORRECT
Second, I\'m active, so I play an a leading role wherever I go.
>> Second, I\'m active so I play a leading role wherever I go.
>> or, Second, I\'m active so I play as a leader wherever I go.
Third, I\'m also have patience, so though I have to do hard work, I can continualy work until it finishes.
>> Lastly, I also have patience. Though I have to work hard, I can work continuously until it will be finished.
>> or, Lastly, I am also patient. Though I have to work hard, I can work continuously until it will be finished.
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