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My favorite time with my family was a summer vacation in 1997. Mom's siblings and their family came to my hometown, Jeju island. We rented a van and went around to various tourist spots all together. One day, for just taking a rest, we were sun bathing and played with swimming on the beach. We also enjoyed different traditional food of the town for whole journey. It was a first time that we went to a trip all together as a big family because of living on far distance from each's residence area. So, it was the most memorable, exciting and happist time with my family for me.

Hi there [이름]^^ What a beautiful day because of you.^^Thank you so much for sending this in. I really had an amazing time reading your composition. I was imagining Jeju Island because of your stories.How often do you go to the beach? I hope that you are going to enjoy this day.Job well done! You were able to express your ideas well,however becareful with the articles and prepositions.Please go over my corrections.IF you have any questions,just raise it in class.See you tomorrow! You made my day!Thank you very much!Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: My favorite time with my family was a summer vacation in 1997. >> My favorite time with my family was my during summer vacation in 1997.Mom\'s siblings and their family came to my hometown, Jeju island. >> Correct! We rented a van and went around to various tourist spots all together. >> We rented a van and went around to various tourist spots together. One day, for just taking a rest, we were sun bathing and played with swimming on the beach. >> For one day,we took a rest,did sun bathing,played and went swimming on the beach. We also enjoyed different traditional food of the town for whole journey. >> We also enjoyed different traditional foods of the town during the trip. It was a first time that we went to a trip all together as a big family because of living on far distance from each\'s residence area. >> It was the first time that we went on a trip together as a big family because we live separately. OR >> It was the first time that we went on a trip together as a big family because we live in distant places. So, it was the most memorable, exciting and happist time with my family for me. >> So, it was the most memorable,exciting and happiest time with my family for me.