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2018-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Writing Exercise: How does body language help you to communicate? Answer in 5 sentences or more. I think that it's very helpful way to communicate. Especially when I communicate with other people in not my mother tongue, it help me easier communication. Because I can't be familiar with other language as much as mother tongue, it always happen to me when I can't remember any words or sentences. Then if I use body language, other people can also feel like what I said. Sometimes they feel like easier and more than I said.

강사 첨삭

Hi Steve!

Thank you for your composition!

Please take note of the suggestions below.

I\'ll talk to you in class!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I think that it\'s very helpful way to communicate.

>> I think that it\'s a very helpful way to communicate.
Especially when I communicate with other people in not my mother tongue, it help me easier communication.

>> This is especially true when I communicate with people who don\'t speak the same language as I do.

Because I can\'t be familiar with other language as much as mother tongue, it always happen to me when I can\'t remember any words or sentences.

>> This is because I\'m not familiar with other languages as much as I am with my mother tongue and I also can\'t remember all words or sentences in a foreign language.

Then if I use body language, other people can also feel like what I said.

>> With the use of body language, other people could know exactly what I mean.

Sometimes they feel like easier and more than I said.

>> Sometimes, it\'s easier for them to understand than when I use words to express myself.

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