Homework 3.16
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What are the advantages and disadvantages of reading on an e-reading device, such as a Kindle or iPad?
: There are good e-reading apps nowadays. They give various fuctions and it makes people very convenient. But, If we keep watching our smartphones, it is very bad for our eyes.
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There are good e-reading apps nowadays.
>> CORRECT!
They give various fuctions and it makes people very convenient.
>> They give various functions and they very convenient to people.
But, If we keep watching our smartphones, it is very bad for our eyes.
>> But, If we keep watching on our smartphones, it is very bad for our eyesight.
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