homework 3.19
학생이 쓴 원문
I do homework in powerenglish for the first time.
I feel generation gap with my parents. For example, my parents can not play the phone, well. So they usually ask me for help. Also they can not heard about what I or my brother say. Then I feel generation gap. Teacher Sharon, you said made me 5 sentence. Despite, I hard to write it , Eventually, I finished it!! I'm very very happy. And this is not homework. I didn't go to english and math academy. So I'm glad I can not tell. Then goodbye Sharon.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You did a good job with your homework,
I\'m happy to read your composition.
I\'ll wait for more.
Have a good day!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I feel generation gap with my parents.
>> I feel that there is a generation gap between me and my parents.
For example, my parents can not play the phone, well.
>> For example, my parents can not use phones very well.
So they usually ask me for help.
>> Correct
Also they can not heard about what I or my brother say.
>> They also don\'t listen to what my brother and I say.
Then I feel generation gap.
>> I feel a generation gap in these cases.
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