Homework 3.2

2021-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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What are the good things and bad things about Japan? What is Japan famous for? I don\'t know about Japan clearly. So I want to study Japan and other countries Japan is famous for their animation. And Japanese food such as takoyaki, soba noodles is famous.

강사 첨삭

Hello,  Michelle! ^^
T[이름]k you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your the night! :)

~ T. Tricia

I don\'t know about Japan clearly.
>> Honestly, I don\'t know much about Japan.

So I want to study Japan and other countries.
>> So, I want to study Japanese and other countries\' languages.

Japan is famous for their animation.
>> Japan is famous for its animation.

And Japanese food such as takoyaki, soba noodles is famous.
>> Japanese food such as takoyaki and soba noodles is famous.

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