homework 3.23
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Don\'t worry.
I understand why you had to change your schedule.
just continue practicing and studying hard!
I hope to talk to you again!
Take care!
~~ Teacher Sharon
In Korea, Halloween day is very special since almost 4 years ago.
>> Halloween became very special in our country four years ago.
However, These day our citizen think Halloween day is just receive candy.
>> However, Koreans nowadays think that Halloween is just about receiving candy.
So I think it is just that I have candy to my friends or parents.
>> I think that I just need to receive candy from my parents.
As you know, other country enjoy the Halloween. Like, make up as Dracula.
>> As you know, other countries enjoy Halloween and they put on makeup like they\'re Dracula.
Our country make up monster only in school or groups.
>> In our country, only students put makeup in school or in groups.
So most of people don\'t enjoy Halloween day.
>> So most people don\'t enjoy Halloween.
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