homework 3.23

2018-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

In Korea, Halloween day is very special since almost 4 years ago. However, These day our citizen think Halloween day is just receive candy. So I think it is just that I have candy to my friends or parents. As you know, other country enjoy the Halloween. Like, make up as Dracula. Our country make up monster only in school or groups. So most of people don't enjoy Halloween day. ( Sharon teacher, I want to you, but your time isn't enough.. so eventually I choice Gray teacher. When I can change the time, I choose you or original teacher (Andrea). And nice to meet you!!)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Don\'t worry.

I understand why you had to change your schedule.

just continue practicing and studying hard!

I hope to talk to you again!

Take care!

~~ Teacher Sharon

In Korea, Halloween day is very special since almost 4 years ago.

>> Halloween became very special in our country four years ago.
However, These day our citizen think Halloween day is just receive candy.

>> However, Koreans nowadays think that Halloween is just about receiving candy.
So I think it is just that I have candy to my friends or parents.

>> I think that I just need to receive candy from my parents.
As you know, other country enjoy the Halloween. Like, make up as Dracula.

>> As you know, other countries enjoy Halloween and they put on makeup like they\'re Dracula.
Our country make up monster only in school or groups.

>> In our country, only students put makeup in school or in groups.

So most of people don\'t enjoy Halloween day.

>> So most people don\'t enjoy Halloween.

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