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2016-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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The city where I live is Gwangju city. I think that the best business to own in my city is "Gwangju Biennale". Gwangju Biennale that is held every 2 years is the international exhibitions of art. So far it has been held seven times since it started in last 1995 at first. Gwangju has been famous for the traditional culture and art in Korea, and the artists are trying to communicate to the world through the Gwangju Biennale. A ordinary traditional market become a gallery, as well as a dirty alley become a work of art during the Biennale. 2016 Gwangju Biennale is planning to hold in October this year. Don't you want to visit Gwangju?

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Hello Sir [이름]! Happy Monday! Thanks for sharing things about Gwangju Biennale. It sounds really interesting. I wish I could visit Gwangju in the future.   ~Teacher Shanee   The city where I live is Gwangju city. >>> Correct!I think that the best business to own in my city is \"Gwangju Biennale\". >>> Correct!Gwangju Biennale that is held every 2 years is the international exhibitions of art. >>> Correct!So far it has been held seven times since it started in last 1995 at first. >>> So far, it has been held seven times since it started in 1995.Gwangju has been famous for the traditional culture and art in Korea, and the artists are trying to communicate to the world through the Gwangju Biennale. >>> Gwangju has been famous in Korea for its traditional cultures and arts, and the artists are trying to communicate through Gwangju Biennale.A ordinary traditional market become a gallery, as well as a dirty alley become a work of art during the Biennale. >>> An ordinary traditional market becomes a gallery and a dirty alley becomes becomes a work of art during the Biennale. 2016 Gwangju Biennale is planning to hold in October this year. >>> The 2016 Gwangju Biennale is planned to be held this October.Don\'t you want to visit Gwangju? >>> Correct!

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