Homework 3

2013-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: What is your greatest accomplishment in your life? I feel accomplishment when I am good at interesting things for me. I am interested in mathematics and I like mathematics. I want to be good at math and I try to do well. As a result, I had got the best grades in the college scholastic ability test. And I feel big satisfaction when I entered college. Lately, I have accomplishment when I played the guitar at guitar club performance. When I joined the club, I played the guitar for the first time. After three monthes, I did performance and I feel happy. Because I will go to Europe, I am anticipating next summer. This travel plan will give greatest accomplishment for me. I work at restrant for this travel. This will be a very good experience.

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Hi there^^, Thank you for doing your homework and sharing yur experience!! You did a great job expressing your ideas!! Keep it up!! I am excited for you!! Wow!! Euroope!! Anyway, See you in class and take care!! ~T.Chelsea~ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:What is your greatest accomplishment in your life? I feel accomplishment when I am good at interesting things for me. >>When I am good and things are interesting for me, I think that\'s my accomplishment. >>I think, my accomplishment is that when I am good and things are interesting for me.I am interested in mathematics and I like mathematics. >>CORRECT!I want to be good at math and I try to do well. >>CORRECT!As a result, I had got the best grades in the college scholastic ability test. >>CORRECT!And I feel big satisfaction when I entered college.>>I feel satisfied when I entered college.Lately, I have accomplishment when I played the guitar at guitar club performance. >>Lately, I have accomplished playing a guitar and performing at the guitar club.When I joined the club, I played the guitar for the first time. >>CORRECT!After three monthes, I did performance and I feel happy.>>After three months, I performed and I feel happy.Because I will go to Europe, I am anticipating next summer. >>I will go to Europe next summer and I am already anticipating for it. This travel plan will give greatest accomplishment for me. >>This travel will be my greatest accomplishment. I work at restrant for this travel. >>I work at the restuarant to earn money for this travel. This will be a very good experience. >>CORRECT!

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