Homework 3
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
What is your greatest accomplishment in your life?
I feel accomplishment when I am good at interesting things for me.
I am interested in mathematics and I like mathematics.
I want to be good at math and I try to do well.
As a result, I had got the best grades in the college scholastic ability test.
And I feel big satisfaction when I entered college.
Lately, I have accomplishment when I played the guitar at guitar club performance.
When I joined the club, I played the guitar for the first time.
After three monthes, I did performance and I feel happy.
Because I will go to Europe, I am anticipating next summer. This travel plan will give greatest accomplishment for me. I work at restrant for this travel. This will be a very good experience.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^,
Thank you for doing your homework and sharing yur experience!!
You did a great job expressing your ideas!! Keep it up!!
I am excited for you!! Wow!! Euroope!!
Anyway, See you in class and take care!!
~T.Chelsea~
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:What is your greatest accomplishment in your life? I feel accomplishment when I am good at interesting things for me.
>>When I am good and things are interesting for me, I think that\'s my accomplishment.
>>I think, my accomplishment is that when I am good and things are interesting for me.I am interested in mathematics and I like mathematics.
>>CORRECT!I want to be good at math and I try to do well.
>>CORRECT!As a result, I had got the best grades in the college scholastic ability test.
>>CORRECT!And I feel big satisfaction when I entered college.>>I feel satisfied when I entered college.Lately, I have accomplishment when I played the guitar at guitar club performance.
>>Lately, I have accomplished playing a guitar and performing at the guitar club.When I joined the club, I played the guitar for the first time.
>>CORRECT!After three monthes, I did performance and I feel happy.>>After three months, I performed and I feel happy.Because I will go to Europe, I am anticipating next summer.
>>I will go to Europe next summer and I am already anticipating for it.
This travel plan will give greatest accomplishment for me.
>>This travel will be my greatest accomplishment.
I work at restrant for this travel.
>>I work at the restuarant to earn money for this travel.
This will be a very good experience.
>>CORRECT!
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