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2016-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Everyone can make a wrong decision. However the most important thing is how do you do after that decision, not to make a wrong decision itself. If you only regret it, you would live your life trapped in the past. Whereas, if you think it as a trial and error and you make a new decision after reflect on yourself about it, it would be helpful in your life. "Althought you wander your way, never regret it!" This is the word that my teacher told me when I was the middle school student. I am living now regarding this word as my life motto.

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Hello Sir! Thank you so much for writing this composition. I appreciate it. Kindly go over the corrections I made. Talk to you later!   ~Teacher Shanee   Everyone can make a wrong decision. >>> Correct!However the most important thing is how do you do after that decision, not to make a wrong decision itself. >>> However, the most important thing is what you do after making that decision and how you prevent yourself from repeating the same mistake.If you only regret it, you would live your life trapped in the past. >>> Correct!Whereas, if you think it as a trial and error and you make a new decision after reflect on yourself about it, it would be helpful in your life.>>> Whereas, if you think of it as trial and error and you make a new decision after reflecting, it would be helpful in your life.\"Althought you wander your way, never regret it!\">>> Correct! [although]This is the word that my teacher told me when I was the middle school student. >>> These are the words my teacher told me when I was a middle school student.I am living now regarding this word as my life motto. >>> This is the motto I am living by.

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