Homework 3
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY:
What do you think is the best way to comfort yourself from "homesickness"?
I think keeping in touch with family and friends is the best way to comfort myself from homesickness. Thesesdays, we can skype or call for free, so whenever we miss hometown or homecountry we can contact with family and friends. And we can talk about memories that we had together with others and then get energy to live actively again.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^
How are you?^^
It\'s a great thing that technology is helping us with this feeling
when we are not in our country or hometowns.
Distance makes us realized how valuable friends and family can be.
Take care!^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
I think keeping in touch with family and friends is the best way to comfort myself from homesickness.
>> CORRECT
OR> I will consider keeping in touch with family and friends so that I won\'t feel homesick.
Thesesdays, we can skype or call for free, so whenever we miss hometown or homecountry we can contact with family and friends.
>> Thesesdays, we can use skype or call for free, so whenever we miss our hometown or homecountry we can contact with family and friends.
And we can talk about memories that we had together with others and then get energy to live actively again.
>> And we can talk about memories that we had together with others and then get the energy to live actively again.
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