Homework #3

2014-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ~ PLEASE MAKE AN ESSAY: How do you plan to manage your work alone? -- In fact, Our Internatiol office located in U.S, and our headquarter located in Hongkong. My company had been working with two Local IT staffs. and my local IT manager is gone. But I'm not nervous. Because I have been working well, and I can do it very perfectly. However, I have to improve my english skill because I have to communicate with my headquarter in hongkong directly. So, I entered this class, Lexi. I know many knowledge as IT, but I'm lack of my english skill. Lexi, Please help me, and teach me. I want to be a nice english speacer!! I'm ready.

강사 첨삭

Oh dear! How I wish I can be a good IT technician too. I envy you because you\'re really good at it. You know what, you have the drive and motivation to learn English already. So I\'m pretty sure that you\'ll persevere and focus in your quest to be a good speaker. Don\'t worry, I\'ll be here to guide you. It wil be my pleasure! Teacher Lexi HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:~ PLEASE MAKE AN ESSAY:How do you plan to manage your work alone?In fact, Our Internatiol office located in U.S, and our headquarter located in Hongkong.>>In fact, our international office is located in the US and our headquarter is in Hongkong.My company had been working with two Local IT staffs.>>Correct :)and my local IT manager is gone.>>But my local IT manager is gone.But I\'m not nervous. Because I have been working well, and I can do it very perfectly.>>I\'m nervous because I have been working well and I can do it perfectly.However, I have to improve my english skill because I have to communicate with my headquarter in hongkong directly.>>However, I have to improve my English skills because I have to communicate  directlywith my colleagues from our headquarter in Hongkong.So, I entered this class, Lexi.>>Correct ^^ >>OR: So I opted to take this class Lexi.I know many knowledge as IT, but I\'m lack of my english skill.>>I\'m knowledgeable as an IT but I lack English skill.Lexi, Please help me, and teach me.>>Lexi, please help me and teach me.I want to be a nice english speacer!!I\'m ready.

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