Homework #3
학생이 쓴 원문
To adela,
I was surprised when I checked the feedback,
the rating of today was higher score than I expected.
Because I thought that I had not done well.
By the way, I hope that you have a good time on weekends!
Q. Explain how to entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home.
Usually when my friends visit to my home, we go out to some restaurant near home.
There are many restaurants, so we can choose various foods.
After a meal, we can go to park for taking a walk and watching nice scenery in the park.
Or we also have a little chat about routine life or sharing special plan.
강사 첨삭
To Kate,
I\'m glad that you have received the feedback.
I hope that you continuously send your homework.
Have a nice day ahead of you Kate! Goodnight.
To adela,
I was surprised when I checked the feedback,
>> CORRECT
the rating of today was higher score than I expected.
>> the rating was higher than what I\'ve expected.
Because I thought that I had not done well.
>> CORRECT
By the way, I hope that you have a good time on weekends!
>> By the way, I hope that you\'ll have a good time on weekends.
Q. Explain how to entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home.
Usually when my friends visit to my home, we go out to some restaurant near home.
>> Usually, when my friends visits my home, we go out to some restaurants near my home.
There are many restaurants, so we can choose various foods.
>> CORRECT
After a meal, we can go to park for taking a walk and watching nice scenery in the park.
>> After a meal, we can go to a park and take a walk and watch nice scenery in the park.
Or we also have a little chat about routine life or sharing special plan.
>> Or we also have a little chat about daily routine life or sharing special plans.
I\'m glad that you have received the feedback.
I hope that you continuously send your homework.
Have a nice day ahead of you Kate! Goodnight.
To adela,
I was surprised when I checked the feedback,
>> CORRECT
the rating of today was higher score than I expected.
>> the rating was higher than what I\'ve expected.
Because I thought that I had not done well.
>> CORRECT
By the way, I hope that you have a good time on weekends!
>> By the way, I hope that you\'ll have a good time on weekends.
Q. Explain how to entertain guests who unexpectedly arrive at your home.
Usually when my friends visit to my home, we go out to some restaurant near home.
>> Usually, when my friends visits my home, we go out to some restaurants near my home.
There are many restaurants, so we can choose various foods.
>> CORRECT
After a meal, we can go to park for taking a walk and watching nice scenery in the park.
>> After a meal, we can go to a park and take a walk and watch nice scenery in the park.
Or we also have a little chat about routine life or sharing special plan.
>> Or we also have a little chat about daily routine life or sharing special plans.
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