Homework 3
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could go back in time and give yourself some advice, what would it be? Why? Give some examples. (THIS IS A QUESTION. DON'T HAVE TO EXAMINE) :)
I tell myself to study English and practice a certain ability only.
English is a communication way with global world. So it is neccessary for our life.
Moreover, Human resources of company need English user whatever thier business type is.
A certain ability means do one thing until you have become only one. For example, if you are the best about your field, people cannot help but need your ability. It can be rise your worth to people. Perhaps, they can't replace you.
So, i tell myself to focus on only one and English.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Sun!
It\'s Tuesday! How have you been doing? By the way, what you did was great! You were able to share your opinions andthoughts about a certain topic and for that, I commend you for a job well done!
I hope you will keep up the good work.
Take care always and can\'t wait tohear your voice again!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
If you could go back in time and give yourself some advice, what would it be? Why? Give some examples. (THIS IS A QUESTION. DON\'T HAVE TO EXAMINE) :)I tell myself to study English and practice a certain ability only.
>>I would tell myself to study English and practice a certain ability.English is a communication way with global world.
>>English is a means of commnicating in this global world.
So it is neccessary for our life.
>>So it is very necessary to us.Moreover, Human resources of company need English user whatever thier business type is. >>correct
OR: Moreover, most companies would require English users whatever their business type is.A certain ability means do one thing until you have become only one.
DO YOU MEAN: A certain ability means doing one thing sincerely.
For example, if you are the best about your field, people cannot help but need your ability.
>>For example, if you are doing your best in a certain field then people can not help but need you with them.
It can be rise your worth to people.
>>It can boost your self confidence.
Perhaps, they can\'t replace you.>>correctSo, i tell myself to focus on only one and English.
>>So I would tell myself to focus only on one thing and on English.
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