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2016-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Fortunately, my husband is my best friend also he becomes my parent. Sometimes my husband becomes my bad friend when he comes home late and he spends a lot of money for his friends despite he is still my best friend. So I think most husband and wife are close friends in the world.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

It\'s nice to know that you consider your husband as your best friend. They say that\'s one of the secrets of a long marriage. Have a great day ahead. I\'ll see you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

Fortunately, my husband is my best friend also he becomes my parent.

>>Fortunately, my husband is my best friend and he is my parent too.
Sometimes my husband becomes my bad friend when he comes home late and he spends a lot of money for his friends despite he is still my best friend.

>>Sometimes he is a bad friend because he comes home late and he spends a lot of money for his friends despite that, he is still my best fiend.
So I think most husband and wife are close friends in the world.

>>So I think most husbands and wives are the closest friends in the world.

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