Homework.3
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강사 첨삭
Hello SUNNY,
I am sorry to hear that you were disappointed because of the movie.
I haven\'t seen the movie yet.
I will watch it this weekend.
Let\'s discuss the movie in the class. kkk ^^
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
Hi Teaher SOPHIA
>>
I saw a your feedback too late haha.
>> I saw your feedback late.
Yesterday I had a two class at school.
>> I had two classes in school yesterday.
one was a painting class in morning 10:00 am. and the other was a theory claa in afternoon.
>> I had a painting class in the morning at 10 A.M. and a theory class in the afternoon.
But.. I didn\'t went to school yesterday. I just saw a movie \'Miss. [Name]\'s Home for Peculiar Childrens in home\'at the threther.
>> Unfortunately, I didn\'t go to school yesterday. I watched the movie \"Miss. [Name]\'s Home fro Peculiar Childrens\" in the theater.
It\'s about who have a supernatural powers fight with bad poeple.
>> It\'s about supernaturals who fight with bad people
I really expeted about that movie because director was a Tim Burton. (one of my favorites directors)
>> I was excited to watch the movie because it was directed by Tim Burton, who is one of my favorite directors.
Anyway I felt really dissappointed that story was so childish.
>> I felt really disappointed about the story because it\'s too childish.
And I want to know about similarly word \'because\'.
>> By the way, I want to know substitute words for the word \"because\".
Here are your answers:
1.even though
>> CORRECT
2. even though
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CORRECT
3. even if
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CORRECT
4. even though
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CORRECT
5. even if
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CORRECT
6. even if
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CORRECT
7. even though
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CORRECT
8. even though
>> even if
9. even if
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CORRECT
10.even if
>> even though
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