Homework.3

2016-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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Hi Teaher SOPHIA I saw a your feedback too late haha. Yesterday I had a two class at school. one was a painting class in morning 10:00 am. and the other was a theory claa in afternoon. But.. I didn't went to school yesterday. I just saw a movie 'Miss. [Name]'s Home for Peculiar Childrens in home'at the threther. It's about who have a supernatural powers fight with bad poeple. I really expeted about that movie because director was a Tim Burton. (one of my favorites directors) Anyway I felt really dissappointed that story was so childish. And I want to know about similarly word 'because'. HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: 1.even though 2. even though 3. even if 4. even though 5. even if 6. even if 7. even though 8. even though 9. even if 10.even if

강사 첨삭

Hello SUNNY,

I am sorry to hear that you were disappointed because of the movie.

I haven\'t seen the movie yet.

I will watch it this weekend.

Let\'s discuss the movie in the class. kkk ^^

Teacher Sophia 

Here are your corrections:

Hi Teaher SOPHIA

>> 
I saw a your feedback too late haha.

>> I saw your feedback late. 
Yesterday I had a two class at school.

>> I had two classes in school yesterday.
one was a painting class in morning 10:00 am. and the other was a theory claa in afternoon.

>> I had a painting class in the morning at 10 A.M. and a theory class in the afternoon.
But.. I didn\'t went to school yesterday. I just saw a movie \'Miss. [Name]\'s Home for Peculiar Childrens in home\'at the threther.

>> Unfortunately, I didn\'t go to school yesterday. I watched the movie \"Miss. [Name]\'s Home fro Peculiar Childrens\" in the theater.
It\'s about who have a supernatural powers fight with bad poeple.

>> It\'s about supernaturals who fight with bad people
 I really expeted about that movie because director was a Tim Burton. (one of my favorites directors)

>> I was excited to watch the movie because it was directed by Tim Burton, who is one of my favorite directors.
Anyway I felt really dissappointed that story was so childish.

>> I felt really disappointed about the story because it\'s too childish.
And I want to know about similarly word \'because\'.

>> By the way, I want to know substitute words for the word \"because\".

Here are your answers:

1.even though

>> CORRECT  
2. even though

>>  CORRECT  
3. even if

>>  CORRECT  
4. even though

>> CORRECT    
5. even if

>> CORRECT    
6. even if

>>  CORRECT  
7. even though

>> CORRECT    
8. even though

>> even if
9. even if

>>  CORRECT  
10.even if

>> even though




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