HOMEWORK 3/7
학생이 쓴 원문
Why do people care about what others think of them?
I like this title! first of all, I think I don\'t know the exact answer! But in my case, sometimes the care comes from low confidence, sometimes it comes from just a curiosity. I don\'t think the second case is bad. But in the first case, I think it isn\'t good for myself. so anyway, alway the best is moderate things.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ye[이름]!
Great start! Your idea is clear, and I like how you shared your personal perspective. Work on sentence structure and word choice for better flow.
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I like this title!
- CORRECT.
first of all, I think I don\'t know the exact answer!
- First of all, I don’t think I know the exact answer!
But in my case, sometimes the care comes from low confidence, sometimes it comes from just a curiosity.
- However, in my case, sometimes caring comes from low confidence, and sometimes it comes from simple curiosity.
I don\'t think the second case is bad. But in the first case, I think it isn\'t good for myself.
- I don’t think the second case is bad, but the first case isn’t good for me.
so anyway, alway the best is moderate things.
- So anyway, balance is always the best.
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