homework 3/8
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
<question>
Nowadays, road rage incidents are very common in Korea. What would you do
if you encounter an angry and rude driver on the road? Are you going to
stop and argue with him or are you just going to let it go? Why?
< answer>
if i will face a rude driver on the road, i will let it go.
>> If I face a rude driver on the road, I will let it go.
if i will stop and argue with him, the more serious violence might be happend between us. because all of us are very angry with each other.
>> If I will stop and argue with him, a more serious violence might happen between us because both of us are angry.
i don\'t want any more violence.
>> I don\'t want any more violence.
i think, the most important thing is to keep the rule on the road voluntarily not to give a damage to the others physically and mentally.
>> I think the most important thing is to follow/ adhere to the rules of traffic not to give damage to others physically and mentally.
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