homework 3.

2018-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

학생이 쓴 원문

1. lose 2. loose 3. effcts 4. affect 5. their i will go to europe in june& july during 40 days for travel alone(myself) i have to english study hard and i must ready to travel hard because europe is more dangerous than korea i was a little scared and upset shelly i have questions Do you have a travel conversation book in power english? i want to study senteces that i can use in travels or i want to change to travel related book. please recommed, shelly But even if it does not exist in power english, I am fine. because our studying is very avaliable for my improve english skills

강사 첨삭

Good day, [이름]!


I am very happy that you are always doing your homework.

About your book. We have the book SURVIVAL ENGLISH IN A NUTSHELL (ON-LINE BOOK) for you.

If you like tell me later so that I will upload it on your page and you may be able to download it form our website.


See you later! The corrections are below.


-Teacher Shelly-


1. lose  
>>> Correct!
2. loose
>> > Correct!
3. effcts
>>> Effects
4. affect
>>>Correct!
5. their
>>>their


 i will go to europe in june& july during 40 days for travel alone(myself)
>>> I will be going to Europe for 40 days, this comming June and July.
I will be traveling alone.


i have to english study hard and i must ready to travel hard
>>> I must study English very well and be ready to travel alone.


 because europe is more dangerous than korea
>>>I think Europe is more dangerous than Korean.


 i was a little scared and upset
>>> I\'m a little upset and scared.


 shelly i have questions
>>> I have questions, Shelly.


Do you have a travel conversation book in power english?
>>> Correct!


i want to study senteces that i can use in travels
>>> I want to study different sentences and expressions that I can use for my travel.


or i want to change to travel related book.
>>> I want to to change my book to a travel related book.


please recommed, shelly
>>> Please recommend a book for me, Shelly.

 

But even if it does not exist in power english, I am fine.
>>> If there isn\'t a travel book in Power English, I\'ll be okay with that.


because our studying is very avaliable for my improve english skills

>>> Our current book will also help me improve my English skill.

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