Homework 3
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
In which country do you think you can receive the best education?
I think the Finland has the best education system. In Finland, many student take debate- type class.
These class make students more focus on their class, and participate in that class actively.
So,I think by using that type class, students\' efficiency of studying can increase.
강사 첨삭
Ramie, please check the corrections I gave you. You were good at explaining your answer.
-Teacher Shelly-
>>>I think Finland has the best education system.
In Finland, many student take debate- type class.
>>>In Finland, many students take a debate-type class.
These class make students more focus on their class, and participate in that class actively.
These class make students more focus on their class, and participate in that class actively.
>>>This class makes students more focus on their class, and participate in that class actively.
So,I think by using that type class, students\' efficiency of studying can increase.
>>>So, I think by using that type of class, students\' efficiency of studying can increase.
>>>So, I think by using that type of class, students\' efficiency of studying can increase.
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