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2020-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I have a question \'another\' and \'other\' what are it different? 1. I have seen a dead rabbit photo by cosmetics test. I felt pitiful for a dead rabbit. And, a dead rabbit lost own eyes color by cosmetics test. I think these reasons many people use vegan cosmetics. I think it is very good thing and many people will think it is important for animal. Lastly, I think humans are the most cruel in Earth. And, we have to respect animal. 2. I guess it is impossible. Because, many people don\'t respect another people\'s inclination. There are many selfish groups in the world. They always think be right themselves and they force other people to be with themselves. So, it\'s impossible because of these reasons Even if every people became veganism, it can\'t help protect the environment. Because, there are many causes of various environmental pollution in the world. Ultimately, we have to respect another people\'s inclination and we can help protect the environment another way

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Hi An!
~Teacher Lucy

Another and other mean the same thing. Another is used with a singular noun. Other is used with uncountable and plural nouns. 
For example, She\'s going to the cinema with another friend(one friend). She\'s going to the cinema with other friends. (many friends)

I have seen a dead rabbit photo by cosmetics test. 
>>CORRECT!
I felt pitiful for a dead rabbit.
>>CORRECT!
 And, a dead rabbit lost own eyes color by cosmetics test. 
>>And, a dead rabbit lost its own eyes color by cosmetics test. 
I think these reasons many people use vegan cosmetics. 
>>CORRECT!
I think it is very good thing and many people will think it is important for animal.
>>CORRECT!
 Lastly, I think humans are the most cruel in Earth. 
>>CORRECT!
And, we have to respect animal.
>>CORRECT!
I guess it is impossible.
>>CORRECT!
 Because, many people don\'t respect another people\'s inclination. 
>>CORRECT!
There are many selfish groups in the world.
>>CORRECT!
They always think be right themselves and they force other people to be with themselves. 
>>They always think the right thing for themselves and they force other people to be with themselves. 
So, it\'s impossible because of these reasons
>>CORRECT!
Even if every people became veganism, it can\'t help protect the environment. 
>>Even if every people became vegans, it can\'t help protecting the environment. 
Because, there are many causes of various environmental pollution in the world. 
>>CORRECT!
Ultimately, we have to respect another people\'s inclination and we can help protect the environment another way
>>Ultimately, we have to respect other people\'s inclination and we can help protect the environment in another way. 

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