Homework 3
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1. Do you think our society is too dependent on technology like smartphones? Why or why not?
A1. I think we are too dependent on technology. But there are both good and bad effects in using it.
Due to COVID19, we cannot help using technology like smartphones or internet. Social distancing has changed our daily life. We are recommended to work at home and have a video conference. And students are taking online classes. I think technology will help us more to live our lives.
But we have to be always aware of it. Too much use of technology can ruin our health and relationship with people. It is important to make a balance between technology and nature.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bomi! Thank you for your thoughts. You did great here! ^ ^ Keep it up! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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But there are both good and bad effects in using it.
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Due to COVID19, we cannot help using technology like smartphones or internet.
Due to COVID19, we cannot help using technology like smartphones or internet.
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Social distancing has changed our daily life.
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We are recommended to work at home and have a video conference.
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And students are taking online classes.
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I think technology will help us more to live our lives.
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But we have to be always aware of it.
But we have to be always aware of it.
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Too much use of technology can ruin our health and relationship with people.
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It is important to make a balance between technology and nature.
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