Homework 30
학생이 쓴 원문
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher.
Others think that it is always better to have a teacher.
Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
Studying by oneself is easy to lost road. that's why people visit the teacher. it make us to know what we have to do. when i was a young student, i went to english academy. At fisrt, i didn't earn the English score at school. But teacher guide me how to study english well and i just followed the teacher.
Of coursely, we should study hard alone when we return to home from school or academy.
Therefore, existence of assistant helps us to go rightly and fastly. beacuse they already experienced what we get.
강사 첨삭
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Hi there my dear Sun...
Thank you so much for sending in your homework...:)Great job!I hope you will keep up the good work.
I will call you again tomorrow.
Take care and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.Studying by oneself is easy to lost road.
>>correct
that\'s why people visit the teacher. >>correct
it make us to know what we have to do.
>>It makes knowledgeable.
when i was a young student, i went to english academy.
>>correct
At fisrt, i didn\'t earn the English score at school.
>>correct
But teacher guide me how to study english well and i just followed the teacher.
>>But the teacher guided me well.Of coursely, we should study hard alone when we return to home from school or academy.
>>Of course weshould also study by ourselves after school or academy.Therefore, existence of assistant helps us to go rightly and fastly. beacuse they already experienced what we get.
>>Therefore asking some help form our teachers is a very good way to learn new things.
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