Homework#30
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HW#30 What is your favorite footwear brand?
My favorite foodwear brand is NIKE because I love their design and slogan which is \"Just do It\". Also, Nike usually advertise their product as my favorite soccer player who is eden hazard. To be honest, their footwear products are not fittable for me because they focus on western people and make them. It means that they make me hurt my foots when I wear shoes for the first time. But, their design is good.
So, I\'ve never regreted that I bought their products.
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Hi Jonathan!
Here are my corrections.
My favorite foodwear brand is NIKE because I love their design and slogan which is \"Just do It\".
>>My favorite footwear brand is NIKE, because I love their design and slogan which is \"Just do It\".
Also, Nike usually advertise their product as my favorite soccer player who is eden hazard.
>>Also, Nike usually advertise their product with my favorite soccer player, Eden Hazard.
To be honest, their footwear products are not fittable for me because they focus on western people and make them.
>>To be honest, their footwear products are not fit for me because they based their shoe sizes on western people.
It means that they make me hurt my foots when I wear shoes for the first time. But, their design is good.
>> It means that Nike shoes hurt my feet when I wear them for the first time. But, their design is good.
So, I\'ve never regreted that I bought their products.
>>So, I\'ve never regretted that I bought their products.
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