Homework (30)
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Can you describe your father?
My father
- Likes exercising
- I can play with him very well
- Very smart
2. Can you describe your mother?
My mother
- Loves me very much
- I can ride bus with her together
- very kind, smart
3. What do you doing with your parents?
- I like playing with my father
- I like riding bus with my mother
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow! :)
~Teacher Sheila ^_^
My father
- Likes exercising
>>My father likes exercising.
- I can play with him very well.
>>CORRECT
- Very smart
>>My father is very smart.
My mother
- Loves me very much
- I can ride bus with her together
- very kind, smart
My mother
- Loves me very much
>>My mother loves me very much.
- I can ride bus with her together
>>I can ride the bus with her.
Or>>We ride the bus together.
- very kind, smart
>>My mother is very kind and smart.
- I like playing with my father
- I like riding bus with my mother
- I like playing with my father
>>CORRECT
- I like riding bus with my mother
>>I like riding the bus with my mother.
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