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2013-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.I have 2.She has 3.They have not 4.He has not 5.We have Today,I have got a "good children's"award.So I'm happy. A "Good children's"award is who give reward to child on May fifth.^^ "My dream and My Wish List" I will talk about my dream and wish list today.Iwant to become a biologist. I like all kinds of animals,flowers,trees,sky,reptiles and sea creatures. It is more interesting than a game and it is more fun than a movie.So when I walking on the road,I saw the flowers,clouds and ants.They are curiosity's object. So I must strive sixty percent and fourty percent for my dream. I want to become a biologist.So I will try to overcome the difficulties wisely. Do you know "National Geographic"?It is a famouse documentaly television program. The famouse MC are "Brady Barr and Nigel Marven"They are "a biologist"and "an explorer"They go to the forest,see some animals and protect the nature. They are my role models.I want to become an explorer like Brady Barr.

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Hi there my dearest TOM^^ T.G.I.F. Finally! We reached your favorite day. How was your day? What are your plans for the weekend? I hope that you are going to have a blast with your family. Congratulations! You got a perfect score! Keep up the good work! Please go over the corrections I gave you. We will be talking about your dream later in class. See you! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.I have >> Correct!2.She has >> Correct!3.They have not >> Correct! OR >> No, they haven\'t4.He has not >> Correct! OR >> No, he hasn\'t.5.We have>> Correct!Today,I have got a \"good children\'s\"award. >> I received \" Good children\'s\" award today. So I\'m happy. >> Correct!A \"Good children\'s\"award is who give reward to child on May fifth.^^>> Good children\'s award is given to a child on May fifth.\"My dream and My Wish List\"I will talk about my dream and wish list today. >> Correct! Iwant to become a biologist. >> I want to become a biologist someday. OR >> I want to be a biologist someday.I like all kinds of animals,flowers,trees,sky,reptiles and sea creatures. >> I like all kinds of animals, flowers, trees, reptiles, sea creatures and even the sky.It is more interesting than a game and it is more fun than a movie. >> Correct! So when I walking on the road,I saw the flowers,clouds and ants. >> When I am walking on the road,I can see the flowers,clouds and ants. They are curiosity\'s object. >> Correct!So I must strive sixty percent and fourty percent for my dream. >> So,I must strive hard for sixty percent and forty percent for my dream. OR >> I must study hard for sixty percent and be motivated for forty percent to reach my dreams.I want to become a biologist. So I will try to overcome the difficulties wisely. >> Correct! OR >> I want to be a biologist someday so I will do my best to overcome the difficulties that will come my way.Do you know \"National Geographic\"? >> Do you know \"National Geographic Channel\"? It is a famouse documentaly television program. >> It is a famous documentary show. OR >> It is a famous documentary television program.The famouse MC are \"Brady Barr and Nigel Marven\" >> The famous MC are Brady Barr and Nigel Marven. They are \"a biologist\"and \"an explorer\" >> Correct! They go to the forest,see some animals and protect the nature. >> They go to the forest to see some animals and protect the nature.They are my role models. >> Correct! I want to become an explorer like Brady Barr. >> Correct!

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