homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.What2.When3.Where4.What5.Why6.When7.When8.How9.What10.Where
So I have a plan and it is to have a pilot certificate.
It is because I want to guide my team comfortably.I will ride an airplane at the height of the sky and then I will shout "We will go to the forest!" So my team will have a feeling of marale. wow! What an imagination I feel my heart beats fast.And I want to go to the "Great Barrier Reef".The Great Barrier reef is in Cairns.. I want to observe many corals and fishes at the Great Barrier Reef.
Now, I breed salt water fishes.When I started to breed salt water fishes,I didn't know anything about their life,so a lot of my fishes died.But now my fishes and corals are healthy.Biologist is a wonderful job.It is because the job can do all of the activities.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear TOM^^
HAPPY MONDAY!! A new week for us to be together again. I am so happy that you did a great job with your homework as well as with your essay. Tonight,we are going to practice it and afterwards we will talk about it in class. How was your weekend? I am looking forward to hear beautiful stories from you. See you! Take Care!Please go over the correction I gave you for your improvement.
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.What
>> Correct!
2.When
>> Correct!
3.Where
>> Why
4.What
>> Correct!
5.Why
>> Wjere
6.When
>> How
7.When
>> Correct!
8.How
>> Where
9.What
>> Correct!
10.Where>> HowSo I have a plan and it is to have a pilot certificate.
>> Correct!It is because I want to guide my team comfortably.
>> Correct!
OR >> It is because I want to guide my team in a comfortable manner.
I will ride an airplane at the height of the sky and then I will shout \"We will go to the forest!\"
>> Correct!
So my team will have a feeling of marale.
>> So my team will have a feeling of morale.
wow! What an imagination I feel my heart beats fast.And I want to go to the \"Great Barrier Reef\".
>> Wow! What an imagination. I want to go to the \"Great Barrier Reef\".
The Great Barrier reef is in Cairns.. I want to observe many corals and fishes at the Great Barrier Reef.
>> It is located in Cairns, Australia. I want to observe a lot of corals and fishes at the Great Barrier Reef.Now, I breed salt water fishes.
>> Correct!
When I started to breed salt water fishes,I didn\'t know anything about their life,so a lot of my fishes died.
>> Correct!
But now my fishes and corals are healthy.
>> Correct!
Biologist is a wonderful job.It is because the job can do all of the activities.
>> Correct!
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