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I like to collect watches. I don't know why I like to do it but I'm very pleased when I gain new one that I want. I possess around ten. They are not exorbitant but prized for me. I'm not a rich therefore if I want new one, I have to earn and save the money and find a way that I could buy it cheaper. Throught these process, I can obtain another things so, these became more and more precious for me. It seems that the watch has a my whole time which I had had, have been having and will have. For this reason, I think that the watch is not simply object but a part of my life.

Hi there [이름]^^ WOW! I think your watches are really beautiful. Watch is really useful for people. Do you know someone who likes collecting watches like you? Great job! You were able to express your thoughts well.You also used different vocabularies to express yourself. What brand of watch do you want to have? Let us talk more about this in class. Thank you very much. Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: I like to collect watches. >> I like collecting watches. I don\'t know why I like to do it but I\'m very pleased when I gain new one that I want. >> I don\'t know why I like to do it but I\'m very pleased when I gain a new one that I want. OR >> I don\'t know why I like to do it but I\'m very pleased if I had a new watch that I really want to have. I possess around ten. >> Correct! They are not exorbitant but prized for me. >> Correct! I\'m not a rich therefore if I want new one, I have to earn and save the money and find a way that I could buy it cheaper. >> I\'m not rich therefore if I want new one, I have to earn, save money and find a way that I could buy it in a cheaper price. Throught these process, I can obtain another things so, these became more and more precious for me. >> Throught these process, I can obtain another thing so these things that I have became more precious for me. It seems that the watch has a my whole time which I had had, have been having and will have. >> Did you mean:It seems that the watch represents the time that I had,I am having and I will have in the future. For this reason, I think that the watch is not simply object but a part of my life. >> For this reason, I think that the watch is not just a simple object but it is a part of my life.