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2013-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If I express myself artistically, I will said,"My body is like wave, and mental is like a pine tree." This means that I can do something flexiblly like wave, and I have a consistant attitude like a pine tree that always has green color.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]! Wow. Nice one! Are you a poet? It seems like you used a verse in a poem to describe yourself. Haha. But anyway, what more can I say? You did a very good job! I\'ll see you later! Vibrant Tuesday morning! ~~ T. Kathrine   If I express myself artistically, I will said,\"My body is like wave, and mental is like a pine tree.\" >> If I will express myself artistically, I will say, \" My body is like a wave, and my mentality is like a pine tree. This means that I can do something flexiblly like wave, and I have a consistant attitude like a pine tree that always has green color. >> This means that I can do something flexibly like a wave, and I have a consistent attitude like a pine tree that always has a green color.

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