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2013-05-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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I'm worry about my future these days. I want to work at the airport as a ground crew. But my English skill isn't good.This job requires high language skills, good service manner, and teamwork. Among these language is most difficult thing. And it affects my confidence lost. So to solve this problem, I use MP3 and listen English files in the commuting time and study hard.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]! Good job! I am very proud of you. You are always exerting very much to study and improve your English skills. It just shows that you are willing to learn for you to be better. I know that in the near future you will be able to be a good English speaker. Strive hard and you will reap success. Just enjoy yor trip! And take care!! ^^ ~~ Always, T. Kathrine   I\'m worry about my future these days. >> I worry about my future these days. I want to work at the airport as a ground crew. >> CORRECT But my English skill isn\'t good. >> CORRECT This job requires high language skills, good service manner, and teamwork. >> CORRECT Among these language is most difficult thing. >> Among these, language is the most difficult thing. And it affects my confidence lost. >> It affects my confidence. So to solve this problem, I use MP3 and listen English files in the commuting time and study hard. >> So to solve this prblem, I use the MP3 and I tried listening to English files while I\'m travelling and I also study hard.

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