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1.over 2.away 3.out 4.away 5.up 6.off I have an another dream.When I see animals,I want to make an animal comic book. Many kids will read that book so they won't play with Smart phones anymore because my comic book is very funny.Maybe they want to become a biologist.Then I'll have a peaceful mind. Until now I am talking about "my dream and my wish list"today. I will imagine what my dream is everyday.It is because thinking of my dream is helpful for me to reach it. So I want to say,"Ican do it" Thank you for listening.

Hi there TOM^^ Long time no see! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a nice job! Please go over the corrections I gave you for your improvement.  I really had fun reading it. You are right! You should always imagine what you want to be and strive harder for you to reach your goals.  Making a comic book is really fun and I know a lot of kids will love it.  I hope to read your comic book in the future. See you later in class! Enjoy the rest of the day! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.over >> out 2.away >> Correct!3.out >> off 4.away >> through5.up >> Correct!6.off>> for I have an another dream. >> Correct! When I see animals,I want to make an animal comic book. >> Correct!Many kids will read that book so they won\'t play with Smart phones anymore because my comic book is very funny. >> A lot of kids will read that book so they won\'t play with their smart phones anymore because my comic book is very funny. Maybe they want to become a biologist. >> Correct! Then I\'ll have a peaceful mind. >> Correct!Until now I am talking about \"my dream and my wish list\"today. >> I am still talking about \"My dream and wish list\" until now.I will imagine what my dream is everyday. >> Correct! It is because thinking of my dream is helpful for me to reach it. >> It is because thinking of my dream will be helpful for me to reach it.So I want to say,\"Ican do it\" >> So I want to say, \" I can do it\".Thank you for listening. >> Correct!