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If I could invent something new, I would develop a product that can insert knowledge to my brain so that I don't need to study any more. If it would be real, everyone also could relive stress for study.
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Thank you for sending this in.^^
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If I could invent something new, I would develop a product that can insert knowledge to my brain so that I don\'t need to study any more.
>>Correct! [anymore]^^
If it would be real, everyone also could relive stress for study.
>>If this happens, everyone will be relieved from stress because of studying.^^
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