Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
As always you are helping me ^^
I prepared my mind to you for a gift of TEACHEAR'S DAY. haha
You gave me a topic about NAMYANG Dairy boycott.
I wanted to talk with you about that.
Our thoughtes went to the same way!
I watched a debate program on the subjection "one thing and another's dispute" last night (corectly midnight, I went to the bed late.)
There were a lot situation moreover NAMYANG accident.
Short example, There were "RAMEN accident in aircraft" and "A man's attack to doorman"
Well-known people's opinions were very variety and differed depending on viewpoint.
In my opinion, people need to have consideration each other and a mind which is "You make my day." and " You are axisting so that I can exist"
What do you think about this subjection?
Thank you for sharing today!
-S.[이름]-
강사 첨삭
Well done, [이름]!
Well, I think people exists because other people need us just like the way we need them.^^
I have the same opinion with you. Understanding should be the most important aspect especially when you\'re prominent or you have a high position.
We should be careful in the every actions that we do especially when we\'re with other people.
\"No man is an island.\"
Thank you for this impressive homework!
T. Leny
As always you are helping me ^^
>>> CorrectI prepared my mind to you for a gift of TEACHEAR\'S DAY. haha>>> I prepared my mind as a gift to you on Teacher\'s Day. ^^You gave me a topic about NAMYANG Dairy boycott.
>>> CorrectI wanted to talk with you about that.
>>> CorrectOur thoughtes went to the same way!>>> Correct
>>> Our thoughts are the same!I watched a debate program on the subjection \"one thing and another\'s dispute\" last night (corectly midnight, I went to the bed late.)>>> I watched a debate program about this subject \"one thing and another\'s dispute\" last night. (Or to be exact, midnight since I went to bed late.)
There were a lot situation moreover NAMYANG accident.
>>> There were a lot of situations regarding Namyang accident.Short example, There were \"RAMEN accident in aircraft\" and \"A man\'s attack to doorman\"
>>> CorrectWell-known people\'s opinions were very variety and differed depending on viewpoint.
>>> Well-known people\'s opinions are varied and different depending on their view points.In my opinion, people need to have consideration each other and a mind which is \"You make my day.\" and \" You are axisting so that I can exist\">>> CorrectWhat do you think about this subjection?>>> What do you think about this subject?Thank you for sharing today!-S.[이름]-
>>> Correct
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