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Korea has proverb that one of the most important thing when you decide about marry, you must confirm partner's family background. It's very important as well as love and money. Children have been affected by parents thinking and behaviors when they were growing that might be effected by children's mental. That's main reason why people significant think of it. My parents, in terms of me, tried to have big think to my sister and me. We went together museums, trips and libraries. I think it was very good to have big think and new experiences. If you want to know your people, look at the their parents.

Hello there^^ Thanks for your time in doing this composition. I appreciate you effort here though you committed a lot of mistakes. Never mind about the mistakes because I saw your great ideas out here. Job well done and it\'s brilliant! Hav time to study the corrections. See you and thanks again.   Teacher Jeny   Korea has proverb that one of the most important thing when you decide about marry, you must confirm partner\'s family background. >>Korea has a proverb about getting married. It says that you must confirm your partner\'s family background before deciding to get marry. It\'s very important as well as love and money. >>Correct Children have been affected by parents thinking and behaviors when they were growing that might be effected by children\'s mental. >>Children have been influenced by their parent\'s mentality and behavior when they are growing. That\'s main reason why people significant think of it. >>That\'s the main reason why people consider and think about it. My parents, in terms of me, tried to have big think to my sister and me. >> For example, my parents are worried about me and my sister. We went together museums, trips and libraries. >>We went together in museums, trips and going to the libraries. I think it was very good to have big think and new experiences. >>I think it is a good thing to consider things and have new experiences. If you want to know your people, look at the their parents. >>Correct >> OR: If you want to know somebody, try to know their parents too.