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2010-10-14 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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I try to gie you my homework sentense during yesterday class but unfortunely, I forget to give you forgive me! then here is my sentens Break the ice *He try to braek the ice during the meeting, but he's lack of humor made situation even more worse Take on board *Although pieces of information was concealed he could take situation on board. Breath down *she breath down he husband to buy her a new bag although I'm not christian this is my favorite verse Though thy beginning was small, yet thy latter end should greatly increase. KJV 8:7

강사 첨삭

Hello Danny,

It's okay because I also had forgotten it too.

Anyway, thank you for remembering it and posting it.

GOOD JOB, 

-Kaye-

 I try to gie you my homework sentense during yesterday class

but unfortunely,

>>I tried to give you my homework sentences during the class yesterday but unfortunately

I forget to give you forgive me!

>>I forgot to give you. Gorgive me!
then here is my sentens

>>Then here are my sentences
Break the ice
*He try to braek the ice during the meeting, but he's lack of
humor made situation even more worse

>>He tried to break the ice during the meeting but his lack of humor made the situation even more worse.
Take on board
*
Although pieces of information was concealed he could take
situation on board.

>>Although pieces of information were concealed he could take the situation on board.
Breath down
*
she breath down he husband to buy her a new bag.

>>She breathed down her husband to buy her a new bag.
although I'm not christian this is my favorite verse

>>Although I’m not a Christian this is my favorite verse.
Though thy beginning was small, yet thy latter end should greatly increase. KJV 8:7


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