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No, I don't agree that success comes from hard work-there is no luck involved. To suceed, luck also need. In fact, I saw many people who always work very hard, but they aren't lucky in all occasion. As a result, they can't get a success and are also dispessed. So I think however hard they work, but if there is no luck, then we can't be better people.

Hello Ms. [Name]! It\'s really nice of you to send your composition. I really appreciate your effort in writing this. ^^ The way you expressed your point of view is really good. Your message is clear and amazing. ^^ I totally agree with your opinion. We can talk more about this in our class. Keep up the good work! ^^ ~~~ Always, T. Kathrine   No, I don\'t agree that success comes from hard work-there is no luck involved. >> CORRECT >> OR: No, I don\'t agree that success come from hard work and with no luck involved. To suceed, luck also need. >> To succeed, luck is also needed. In fact, I saw many people who always work very hard, but they aren\'t lucky in all occasion. >> Infact, I  saw many people who are always working but they aren\'t lucky in all occasions. As a result, they can\'t get a success and are also dispessed. >> As a result, they can\'t be successful and they are also depressed. So I think however hard they work, but if there is no luck, then we can\'t be better people. >> So I think that no matter how hard we work, if there is no luck involved, then we can\'t be better people.