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2013-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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I agree that money can't buy happiness. Though we can buy happiness, we can't be happy. Because emotion and economical indicator can't be compared. Futhemore, if we can buy happiness, then rich people must be happy. But in fact, they also have their's problem and are anxious a lot. So I think it is false.

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Hello there Ms. [Name]! Thanks for writing your thoughts here. Well, I really do agree with your idea. Of course, money can\'t buy happiness. There are some people whom I know who attested to that. I\'ll see you later! ~~ T. Kathrine ^^   I agree that money can\'t buy happiness. >> CORRECT Though we can buy happiness, we can\'t be happy. >> CORRECT Because emotion and economical indicator can\'t be compared. >> Because emotions and economical indicators cannot be compared. Futhemore, if we can buy happiness, then rich people must be happy. >> CORRECT (Spelling, Furthermore) But in fact, they also have their\'s problem and are anxious a lot. >> But in fact, they also have their own problems and they are anxious a lot. So I think it is false. >> CORRECT

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