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2013-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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I disagree that a job that requires a lot of thinking is more difficult than a job that requires no thinking. I think every work is required to think in this world. For example, sports player, progamer, actor and so on are much less required to think than doctor, lawyer, proffesor and so on. But I think they are also required to think and remember their own professional knowledge. So, just in study part, they aren't required, they also should well know about their expertise.

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Hello Ms. [Name]! ^^It was great composition. I really admire your opinion. Keep up the great job! I\'ll talk to you later! Teacher Kathrine ^_^   I disagree that a job that requires a lot of thinking is more difficult than a job that requires no thinking. >> CORRECTI think every work is required to think in this world. >> CORRECT >> OR: I think that every work in this world requires thinking. For example, sports player, progamer, actor and so on are much less required to think than doctor, lawyer, proffesor and so on. >> For example, sports player, proggramer, actor and so on are required to think less than a doctor, lawyer, professor and others. But I think they are also required to think and remember their own professional knowledge. >> CORRECT So, just in study part, they aren\'t required, they also should well know about their expertise. >> DID YOU MEAN: So just in studying part, students are not required to think but they should know well where their expertise is.

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