homework
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I agree that learning from experience is better than learning from a book. I have two reasons for them.
First of all, knowledge learned from experience can't be forgot. Because I experienced and felt by myself. So I can use them quite freely.
Also, we can deal with emergent situation well through skills learned from experience. Though I undergo difficult situation, I can broke this difficulty up with my own experience.
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Hello there^^
Great job for this composition. Great thought you have there! Go on keep on expressing your thoughts and I know that
in time you will become fluent with it. Thanks for this one and see you again in our class.
Teacher Kathrine
I agree that learning from experience is better than learning from a book.
>>Correct
I have two reasons for them.
>>CorrectFirst of all, knowledge learned from experience can\'t be forgot.
>>First of all, knowledge learned from experience can\'t be forgotten.
Because I experienced and felt by myself. So I can use them quite freely.
>> CorrectAlso, we can deal with emergent situation well through skills learned from experience.
>>In addition, we can deal with emergent situations by applying the acquired skills gained from experience.
Though I undergo difficult situation, I can broke this difficulty up with my own experience.
>>Correct
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