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강사 첨삭
Good evening!
I hope you had a fantastic day earlier.
Those exotic foods sound gross.
However, I\'m happy that you found the courage to try eating it.
At least you were able to experience it.
Nothing beats first hand experience.
Anyway, enjoy the rest of the evening!
I\'ll see you again first thing tomorrow.
I went to Vietnam and Cambodia 4 years ago and it was my first visit.
>>>Correct!
Those places are very different about life style, food and culture compared to Korea.
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>>>Or: Those places have very different life style, food and culture compared to Korea.
It was interesting to me.
>>>Correct!
The most nicest thing is that product\'s are very cheap and good.
>>>The nicest thing is that the products are very cheap and good.
Especially, they have many street foods that I never haven\'t experienced in Korea.
>>>Especially, they have many street food that I\'ve never experienced in Korea.
They fried and showed off the frogs, spiders and some animals.
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At glance, it was so disgusting so, I never didn\'t think try to eat those.
>>>At a glance, it was so disgusting. So I never thought trying to eat those.
But, one of my friends bought fried big spiders and he ate it.
>>>Correct!
He said it\'s crunch and salty.
>>>He said it\'s crunchy and salty.
I finally decided try to eat it but, I don\'t want too much bite so, I bit a leg.
>>>I finally decided to try to eat it; but, I didn\'t want to bite so much so I bit a leg.
I heard fried spider is common in Combodia.
>>>I heard that fried spider is common in Cambodia.
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