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학생이 쓴 원문
My future after 10yedrs
Ib live in Australia with my family,husband and children.
I emigrated from Korea to here 7 years ago for my children.
I always look for the better life. Nowadays, I am more relaxed than in Korea. So I am satisfied.
It is just not imagine.
I will definetly be there.
So I am preparing many thing, to learn languge,
To get certificate, to save money for settlement.
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The reason is why i am learn to English.
I have to study more hard. But so tired every night.
This is a worryment on my mind.
I will study very hard with you.
I allways appreciated to you.
강사 첨삭
A dreamy Thursday to you, [이름]!
Thank you for keeping your promise.
You have an exemplary goal here, [이름].
I have to say that many of my friends would like to stay in Australia, too.
What\'s in Australia that you can\'t find in any other places?
Perhaps, you can answer this question in class.
Again, thank you for allotting some time to write all these down.
You must be so tired when you were doing this but still, you went on with it.
Let us always do our very best in all our classes.
Catch you later, [이름]!
_Klein
My future after 10yedrs>>Here I am in 10 years:
>>Here is my future in 10 years:Ib live in Australia with my family,husband and children.
>>I will be living in Australia then with my family - my husband and my children.I emigrated from Korea to here 7 years ago for my children.
>>I will migrate there from Korea seven years before having children for their sake.I always look for the better life.
>>I always look for a better life.
Nowadays, I am more relaxed than in Korea. So I am satisfied.>>By that time, I will be more relaxed than when I was in Korea, so I will be satisfied.It is just not imagine.
>>This is not just an imagination.I will definetly be there.
>>Correct! [spelling check: definitely]
OR >> I will definitely stay there.So I am preparing many thing, to learn languge, To get certificate, to save money for settlement.>>This is why I am preparing so many things such as learning the English language for me to get a certificate and for me to save enough money for my settlement in Australia.------------------The reason is why i am learn to English.
>>This is why I have to learn English.
>>This is the reason that pushed me to learn English.I have to study more hard. But so tired every night.
>>I have to study harder but I feel so tired every single night.This is a worryment on my mind.
>>This is what I worry about.
>>This worries me.I will study very hard with you.
>>Correct!I allways appreciated to you.
>>I have always appreciated you...
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