homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I agree that we sometimes good to lie. When we can make a good result or we can make someone hurt by lying, we should tell a white lie.
But I want to draw a line. I only agree that when we are in this situation, we can lie. Otherwise we should control ourselves.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [Name]!
Bravo!! You made another impressive composition here.
It really depends on what situation if we are going to lie or not. ^^
Keep on speaking up your thoughts because your are just on the right track.
Just don\'t forget to review rules in constructing correct sentences.
But all in all you did a great job. Thanks again and see you tomorrow!!
~~ Always,
Teacher Kathrine
Yes, I agree that we sometimes good to lie.
>> Yes, I agree that sometimes it is good to lie.
When we can make a good result or we can make someone hurt by lying, we should tell a white lie.
>> We can make a good result or we can hurt someone by lying, so we should tell a white lie. But I want to draw a line.
>> CORRECT ^^
I only agree that when we are in this situation, we can lie.
>> I only agree with that when we are in this kind of situation, we can lie.
Otherwise we should control ourselves.
>> CORRECT ^^
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