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2013-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Yes, I agree that we sometimes good to lie. When we can make a good result or we can make someone hurt by lying, we should tell a white lie. But I want to draw a line. I only agree that when we are in this situation, we can lie. Otherwise we should control ourselves.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]! Bravo!! You made another impressive composition here. It really depends on what situation if we are going to lie or not. ^^ Keep on speaking up your thoughts because your are just on the right track. Just don\'t forget to review  rules in constructing correct sentences.  But all in all you did a great job. Thanks again and see you tomorrow!! ~~ Always, Teacher Kathrine   Yes, I agree that we sometimes good to lie. >> Yes, I agree that sometimes it is good to lie. When we can make a good result or we can make someone hurt by lying, we should tell a white lie. >> We can make a good result or we can hurt someone by lying, so we should tell a white lie. But I want to draw a line. >> CORRECT ^^ I only agree that when we are in this situation, we can lie. >> I only agree with that when we are in this kind of situation, we can lie.  Otherwise we should control ourselves. >> CORRECT ^^

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