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2013-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.a2.a3.a4.a5.an6.an7.an8.an9.an10.a Tomorrow,we will go to the camp. We will eating Bul-go-kiand hamand we will play fun with my friend. But I feel sad because we don't have a class. See you later

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear TOM^^ SUPERB! You got a perrfect score!  I am so happy because you already know the usage of articles. Great job! Keep up the good work!  I hope that you will have a great time tomorrow with your friends. Oh! Don\'t forget to call the Korean managers about your class tomorrow.  I will be a bit sad but also happy because I know you will have a great time! See you later! Teacher Nina 1.a >> Correct! 2.a >> Correct! 3.a >> Correct! 4.a >> Correct! 5.an >> Correct! 6.an >> Correct! 7.an >> Correct! 8.an >> Correct! 9.an >> Correct! 10.a>> Correct!Tomorrow,we will go to the camp. >> Correct!We will eating Bul-go-kiand hamand we will play fun with my friend. >> We will eat Bul-go-ki and ham. I will play with my friend and have fun. OR >> We will eat Bul-go-ki and ham. We will play and have fun with my friend.But I feel sad because we don\'t have a class. >> But I feel sad because we are not going to have a class tomorrow.See you later >> Correct! OR >> See you later. (Don\'t forget the punctuation mark.^^)

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