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2013-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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Would you ever donate a kidney or another vital organ in order to save other person's life? Why? Why not? -> I would like to donate some vital organs to save other person's life if it is possible. Because I will be very proud of me if donation of my organs is very for saving other person's life. I think that many people are helping me whether I can realize or not. So I want to help other people whatever I can do. The donation will be also one of them.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Good morning dear.

Yeah, I will also feel very happy if my donated organ helped someone to be alive.

I think donating one\'s organ is not bad. It is actually a heroic act.

Have a great day.

See you later.^^

T. Chloe

 Would you ever donate a kidney or another vital organ in order to save other person\'s life? Why? Why not?
I would like to donate some vital organs to save other person\'s life if it is possible. 

>> Correct

>> Yes I would like to donate some of my vital organs to save another person\'s life.
Because I will be very proud of me if donation of my organs is very for saving other person\'s life.

>> It is because I will feel very proud if my organ that was donated saves that person\'s life.
I think that many people are helping me whether I can realize or not.

>> I think many people are helping me in many ways whether I am aware of it or not.
So I want to help other people whatever I can do.

>> So I want to help other people in any way I can.
The donation will be also one of them.

>> Donating will also be one of them.

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