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2013-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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If you had time machine, where would you go and why? I want to go first grade in my middle school. Because If I study very hard I will be a good student, and I will go to better high school.

강사 첨삭

Hi baby happy Friday!! Thank you so much for doing your homework.. Two thumbs up baby.. I\'m so proud of you! Enjoy your weekend baby.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ If you had time machine, where would you go and why? >>correctI want to go first grade in my middle school. >>I want to attend my first grade in my middle school. Because If I study very hard >>correctI will be a good student, and I will go to better high school. >>correct

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