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2013-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If I could change one major historical event, it would be Japanese colonial era. In fact, the Joseon Dynasty which is history of Korea was invaded by a foreign country. Finally, We was ruled by Japan and went through difficult era. So, if time could go back, I recomend that adopt the Western culture and invade Japan first.

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Hi there!!! ^^ That was an amazing composition. It was real and very interesting. Keep up the great job! Have a wonderful weekend. Teacher Kathrine ^_^   If I could change one major historical event, it would be Japanese colonial era. >> If I could change one major historical event, it would be the Japanese colonial era. In fact, the Joseon Dynasty which is history of Korea was invaded by a foreign country. >> In fact in the hisotry of Korea, the Joseon Dynasty was invaded by a foreign country. Finally, We was ruled by Japan and went through difficult era.>> We were ruled by Japan and we went thorugh a difficult era. So, if time could go back, I recomend that adopt the Western culture and invade Japan first. >> DID YOU MEAN: So if I go back in time, I recommend that we should have adopted the Western culture and invaded Japan first.

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