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Last saturday, I went to Gang nam for skin care. I had too much hairs on the skin. So I wanted to remove these for good looking. And it took very short time, but it had little of pains. By using laser, killing the root of hair on the skin, so it couldn't grow again. With out bad influences, I can get smooth skin. After finishing a surgical operation, I bought a cup of coffee, then, went to the supermarket for shopping. Although there weren't any speacial events on last saturday, I thought, I've done many things,hahaha. I have to finish.

Hi [이름]! You did a lot of things last weekend! Anyways, thanks for sharing them to me. See you in class! T. Monica Here are my corrections: Last saturday, I went to Gang nam for skin care. >>Last Saturday, I went to Gangnam for my skin care. I had too much hairs on the skin. So I wanted to remove these for good looking. >>My skin has a lot of hairs. I want to remove them so I will look good. And it took very short time, but it had little of pains. >>It took a very short time to remove the hairs and it is not painful at all. By using laser, killing the root of hair on the skin, so it couldn't grow again. >>By using laser, the roots of the hair will die so it couldn't grow again. With out bad influences, I can get smooth skin. >>Now, I have a smooth skin without undergoing harmful procedures. After finishing a surgical operation, I bought a cup of coffee, then, went to the supermarket for shopping. >>After finishing the hair removal procedure, I bought a cup of coffee. Then I went to the supermarket to shop. Although there weren't any speacial events on last saturday, I thought, I've done many things,hahaha. >>Althought there weren't any special events last Saturday, I think I've done many things! Hahahaha!  I have to finish. >>Correct sentence