homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Kitchen
2.Bed room
3.Bath room
4.Living room
5.Dressing room
Teacher Nina!
Do you remember I went to the Don-Ne-Ko camp?
It was fun! and yesterday I saw Jeju VS Seoul soccer game.
Almost finished two round Jeju was 4score,Seoul was 3score.
Suddenly!Seoul had a goal!So the score is 4VS4.
It was so sad,but It was a perpect game.
How about your weekend?
I miss you!...^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there adorable TOM^^
A FANTASTIC MONDAY TO YOU^^ It\'s a brand new week for us to learn a lot of things. I am so happy that you had a great time during the weekend. I missed you too. For your homework, you almost got a perfect score! Congratulations! You have to be careful with the spelling of your words. Keep up the good work! I am excited to talk to you in class. See you! Don\'t forget to eat your dinner okay? Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.Kitchen
>> Correct!2.Bed room
>> Correct!3.Bath room
>> Correct!/ BATHROOM4.Living room
>> Correct!5.Dressing room>> CLOSET Teacher Nina!
>> Correct!Do you remember I went to the Don-Ne-Ko camp?
>> Do you remember that I went to Don-Ne-Ko camp? It was fun! and yesterday I saw Jeju VS Seoul soccer game.
>> It was fun and yesterday I saw Jeju VS Seoul soccer game.Almost finished two round Jeju was 4score,Seoul was 3score.
>> When it was about to finish after two rounds, Jeju\'s score was 4 and Seoul was 3.Suddenly!Seoul had a goal!So the score is 4VS4.
>> Seoul suddently got a goal so the score was 4 vs 4.
OR >> Seould suddently got a goal so there was a tie.It was so sad,but It was a perpect game.
>> I felt really sad but it was a perfect game. (Be careful with the spelling of the word perfect.^^)How about your weekend?
>> How was your weekend?I miss you!...^^
>> Correct!
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