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2013-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.Kitchen 2.Bed room 3.Bath room 4.Living room 5.Dressing room Teacher Nina! Do you remember I went to the Don-Ne-Ko camp? It was fun! and yesterday I saw Jeju VS Seoul soccer game. Almost finished two round Jeju was 4score,Seoul was 3score. Suddenly!Seoul had a goal!So the score is 4VS4. It was so sad,but It was a perpect game. How about your weekend? I miss you!...^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there adorable TOM^^ A FANTASTIC MONDAY TO YOU^^ It\'s a brand new week for us to learn a lot of things.  I am so happy that you had a great time during the weekend. I missed you too.  For your homework, you almost got a perfect score! Congratulations! You have to be careful with the spelling of your words.  Keep up the good work! I am excited to talk to you in class. See you! Don\'t forget to eat your dinner okay? Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.Kitchen >> Correct!2.Bed room >> Correct!3.Bath room >> Correct!/ BATHROOM4.Living room >> Correct!5.Dressing room>> CLOSET Teacher Nina! >> Correct!Do you remember I went to the Don-Ne-Ko camp? >> Do you remember that I went to Don-Ne-Ko camp? It was fun! and yesterday I saw Jeju VS Seoul soccer game. >> It was fun and yesterday I saw Jeju VS Seoul soccer game.Almost finished two round Jeju was 4score,Seoul was 3score. >> When it was about to finish after two rounds, Jeju\'s score was 4 and Seoul was 3.Suddenly!Seoul had a goal!So the score is 4VS4. >> Seoul suddently got a goal so the score was 4 vs 4. OR >> Seould suddently got a goal so there was a tie.It was so sad,but It was a perpect game. >> I felt really sad but it was a perfect game. (Be careful with the spelling of the word perfect.^^)How about your weekend? >> How was your weekend?I miss you!...^^ >> Correct!

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