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I disagree that making a bad decision is better than making no decision. I have two reasons for them.
First, making a bad decision can make bad result. Though we have no choice to make a decision, once we do, it can't go back to the beginning. So, we will regret choosing bad decision.
Secondely, bad decision can hurt other people. For example, When I did homework, I chose a bad decision that I copied friend's, and we were scolded by teacher. Because our homeworks were same each other. So, my friend was also scolded.kkkkkk
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Teacher Kathrine ^_^
I disagree that making a bad decision is better than making no decision.
>> CORRECT!
I have two reasons for them.
>> I have two reasons for disagreeing. First, making a bad decision can make bad result.>> CORRECT!
Though we have no choice to make a decision, once we do, it can\'t go back to the beginning.
>> CORRECT!
So, we will regret choosing bad decision.
>> CORRECT!Secondely, bad decision can hurt other people.
>> CORRECT! [Just be careful with some typographical error. \"secondly\" ^^]
For example, When I did homework, I chose a bad decision that I copied friend\'s, and we were scolded by teacher.
>> For example, when I did my homework I choose to copy my friend\'s homework which is a bad decission, so we got scolded by our teacher.
Because our homeworks were same each other.
>> Because our homework are the same.
So, my friend was also scolded.kkkkkk
>> CORRECT!
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