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2013-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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I disagree that making a bad decision is better than making no decision. I have two reasons for them. First, making a bad decision can make bad result. Though we have no choice to make a decision, once we do, it can't go back to the beginning. So, we will regret choosing bad decision. Secondely, bad decision can hurt other people. For example, When I did homework, I chose a bad decision that I copied friend's, and we were scolded by teacher. Because our homeworks were same each other. So, my friend was also scolded.kkkkkk

강사 첨삭

Hi there!!! ^^ kkkkkk That was a funny but great composition. I hope you\'ll keep on writing. Keep up the great job! Have a great evening ahead! Talk to you soon! Teacher Kathrine ^_^   I disagree that making a bad decision is better than making no decision. >> CORRECT! I have two reasons for them. >> I have two reasons for disagreeing. First, making a bad decision can make bad result.>> CORRECT! Though we have no choice to make a decision, once we do, it can\'t go back to the beginning. >> CORRECT! So, we will regret choosing bad decision. >> CORRECT!Secondely, bad decision can hurt other people. >> CORRECT! [Just be careful with some typographical error. \"secondly\" ^^] For example, When I did homework, I chose a bad decision that I copied friend\'s, and we were scolded by teacher. >> For example, when I did my homework I choose to copy my friend\'s homework which is a bad decission, so we got scolded by our teacher. Because our homeworks were same each other. >> Because our homework are the same. So, my friend was also scolded.kkkkkk >> CORRECT!

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