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2013-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Q>> Based on your experience, which do you consider as the best steak house? Explain why. A>> Well~ I think~ My best favorite steak house is the 'OUTBACK" It is an american style restaurant There is a little reason~ first of all~ it is very clean~ and good service secondly there are several event~ lastly the food is very delicious~ but the cost is very expensive~~that is a disadventage

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HELLO THERE^^   I suddenly felt like I want to eat steak while checking your answers here. Good job and thanks for this one^^ See you and study the corrections below.   Teacher Kristel   Q>> Based on your experience, which do you consider as the best steak house? Explain why.A>> Well~ I think~ My best favorite steak house is the \'OUTBACK\">>Well I think, for me the best steak house is the Outback. Which happened to be my favorite steak house.It is an american style restaurant>>It is an American style restaurant.There is a little reason~>>I just have few reasons.first of all~ it is very clean~ and good service>>First of all it is very clean and the service is good.secondly there are several event~>>Secondly, they held several events.lastly the food is very delicious~>>Lastly the food is very delicious.but the cost is very expensive~~that is a disadventage >>But the cost is very expensive and that is a disadvantage.

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